Feedback on groups Rough Cut and Final Cut

Rough Cut Group Feedback:

After the group viewed our rough cut they gave us some useful and constructive feedback. Regions that we thought were fine, but actually needed attention to them. There were parts we did leave out in the rough cut like our titles which we had just not on final cut express. The things we need to adapt on were:

-Put some titles in.
-It would be good if it had a dimb soundtrack dureing the film.
-The film opening is too long.
-Some of the voiceovers of our actor speaking were too hard to hear.
-Would be more effective with more close ups.

Things that were told were good:

-Camera work was good, like good match ona ction shots.
-Production logo was very good.
-liked the gun shot, thought the sound and the reducton of the speed was excellant dureing that shot.
-Was easy to know what the genre of the film was and what the film was about.

The comments are very useful, they came in to a lot of hand for us so now we can work on our crime caper opening.
We do agree that it is too long but when the titles are in this will look very good and affective, so we may get rid of a few shots that are not needed, on the road when the car is moving along, those shots go on for too long and can be edited.
The titles we do understand that we need to put these in and this has already been done. We have actually got a few close ups just not as many as some of the audience wanted but we believe that too many close ups would ruin the film, in the opening sequence you want to establish a lot so you cannot establish massive amounts when a close up shot is made. Also the same with the voicerover it is better with the voice not being too clear, then it gives the audience a question, what does this man do?

Feedback on Final Cut:

Our final piece had all the bad comments from our rough cut edited, this makeing ther every little negative comments for our final cut which is good.

-A stylish opening sequence, stylish in which i mean a good variation of good camera shots and a good soundtrack when the titles come in.
-Liked all the voiceover/background sound.

The negative comment we did have:

-The soundtrack was too quick for your crime caper film.

Our views on our whole final cut was that we thought it was a really good opening sequence to a crime, it met all the conventions of a media film and we used various camer angles and lighting effects to suit the mood. Our film is very clear in the sequence unlike some films which only become clear during half way through.